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Sad I am
Sad because of my comitment
Sad I am
tired and disguisted of this predictment
and all I have left is lent
all my ties are finally spent
since this marriage all my wants denied
tonight now all my flaws were underlined
for this world to see
what you think is wrong with me
so here I stand exposed
so you may see my failures up close
and somehow I still luv this chick
someone please tell me- whats up with this luv shit
sometimes I wonder how you call this a relationship
when my heart keeps telling me to call it quits
but am I so afraid of just being alone
that I will continue to live in this broken home
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A poem about a great marriage.

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:iconclaytonbarton:
This is quite a Heartbreaking peice of writing. I can understand to some extent. Never been married, but have been in a relationship that wasn't a happy one. Sometimes you just look at the situation, step outside the box and wonder to yourself 'this isn't what love is supposed to be'.

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We measure things by what we are... To the Maggots in the cheese, the cheese is their Universe... To the Worms in the corpse, the corpse is their Cosmos...
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yea been there myself too hon xxj:hug::)

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life is like a bowl of jelly it takes very little to upset the balance

lifes a bitch but only if you let it be so <img src="http://www.the-n.com/media/quiz/badges/candyheart_quiz/loveya.gif" border="0" /><

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