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Sad I am
Sad because of my comitment
Sad I am
tired and disguisted of this predictment
and all I have left is lent
all my ties are finally spent
since this marriage all my wants denied
tonight now all my flaws were underlined
for this world to see
what you think is wrong with me
so here I stand exposed
so you may see my failures up close
and somehow I still luv this chick
someone please tell me- whats up with this luv shit
sometimes I wonder how you call this a relationship
when my heart keeps telling me to call it quits
but am I so afraid of just being alone
that I will continue to live in this broken home
A poem about a great marriage.
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Gunzino Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
"and somehow I still luv this chick
someone please tell me- whats up with this luv shit
sometimes I wonder how you call this a relationship
when my heart keeps telling me to call it quits
but am I so afraid of just being alone
that I will continue to live in this broken home" <-- Very poignant for me. Deep words my man!
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MissCM Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
Wow..amazing
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:iconpurpleandorangezebra:
You are so amazing, I definitely look up to you.
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DevinRichard Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
Thank you so much. I can't believe someone has read that and I wrote that so long ago.
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purpleandorangezebra Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
You are welcome. It is beautiful.
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DevinRichard Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
Wait for my new works on Black Flame.
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purpleandorangezebra Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
I will.
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jeannie64 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2008  Professional Writer
yea been there myself too hon xxj:hug::)
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ClaytonBarton Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
This is quite a Heartbreaking peice of writing. I can understand to some extent. Never been married, but have been in a relationship that wasn't a happy one. Sometimes you just look at the situation, step outside the box and wonder to yourself 'this isn't what love is supposed to be'.
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