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I'm going to tell you a story and most of it is true
but you don't have to believe it if you don't want to
I went to a church, but my friend called it a mission
when I went inside the congregation was almost all women
there was this old man sitting behind us just grinning
in the back of my mind I heard something say"Just listen"
as I did so I noticed a couple not doing to well
you see the wife knew her husband was cheating
out of vengence this woman was eager to raise hell
somehow I knew these women had been watching me since I entered the door
and in this house I could partake in forsaken sexual favors galore
there was another youngwoman that had just come over and sat down
I knew she loved the thrill of God fearing men and didn't mind fooling around
I just kept slipping away, shocked but still listening
the longer I stayed, the more I kept resisting
then there was this thick sista that smiled every time she passed
dont ask me how I knew she liked in from behind deep in her Sasafrase
or the innocent looking directors wife
who prided herself on draining a man dry
soon my spirit made me get up because I needed to get away
but my flesh felt the hunger and it fought with me to stay
I remember before Leaving I staired back at that old man for a few mnutes
I heard a voice say "Nomatter where you go... you will always be tempted."
A poem about temptation.
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Da-Saga Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2007
wonderful, thanks for sharing.
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Furnosaurus Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
temptation. something that many people deal with every night.. (aswell) heheh I just thought everyone else was doing it so I followed suit..
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DevinRichard Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
I'm going to act like you didn't type that!
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nicole1111 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
temptation. something that many people deal with every day
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marcuzakamoo Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
where did the title come from though?? just somethin' random or...
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:icondevinrichard:
DevinRichard Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
It's what I was told in the poem!
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:iconmarcuzakamoo:
marcuzakamoo Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2007
oooh aight. my bad...
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marcuzakamoo Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
temptation. something that many deal with every day. beautifuly written....
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DevinRichard Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
Thanks!
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jaris1425 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
love it.........
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