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There is a face I thought I deserved
a girl I reserved my heart for
only she's ashamed
and can't mention my name
anytime her parents are in town
you see that really astounds me
or maybe I'm just there for her convenience
when she says she loves me...she really doesn't mean it
because there no problem when we're shopping
or out bar hopping on a date
but the moment I make the mistake
and step out of my place
how easily I'm reminded she wont stand up for me
because her excuss always start like "Listen see here's the thing."
but what she hasn't realized
that now I see through her perfect disguise
and with her very last excuss
the Queen of hearts has just become... the Queen of losers
because her lies I will nolonger be feed
so soon my governing Queen
shall know the Real King
And I shall cry..."Off with her head!"
A poem about Relinquishing someone's Throne!
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ConH Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
haha i like the ending :)
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KryssBranzi Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007
HAHA
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DevinRichard Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007
So I take it you approved!
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:iconkryssbranzi:
KryssBranzi Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007
Yup i couldn't possible not and i really like the title lol
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RavenCalhoun Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2007   Writer
this lady you'rer writing about sort of reminds me of a certain someone...
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lpobsessed Featured By Owner May 17, 2007
Nice I like it
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DevinRichard Featured By Owner May 17, 2007
Thank you. Now read more please!!!!!!!!1
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Bifftasha Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, brilliantly done! Revenge is so sweet. lol
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DevinRichard Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007
My thanks Madame!
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RavenCalhoun Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007   Writer

:rofl:
I like the twisted ending
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