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Once I was drowning
and a man said "Take my hand."
he drew me from the depths of despare
by just showing that he cared
just by reaching out
I realised what this world was about
I came to a quick understanding
of all the things I took for granted
like waking up each day
or perhaps just finding time to say...
Thanks for being there when I needed you most
and thanks for not pushing me away...just drawing me closer
A poem about remeberance and thanks.
holayutasan Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010  Student Writer
Very nice!
jeannie64 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2008  Professional Writer
yea great work honey xxj:hug::)
ClaytonBarton Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
We don't realize sometimes, how much of an impact we have on the people around us. With one word, a compliment, or an insult, we can determin wheather a persons day is happy or glum. And merely reaching out to someone, can mean the world to them. It may be the one thing that stops them from giving up.
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